Writing IVC: Portfolio

Student ID: 06151

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	4	3	7	4	18
Blog posts	2	7	13	12	36	20	90
Words	104	485	2626	1741	3935	1437	10328
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Mega Essay	07.10.16	22	1487	0	0	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	Necessary places	07.10.26	5	384	0	0	0	0
Movie review 07.11.11	Movie review: Toy story 1	07.11.11	5	410	5	1	1	0
Community life 07.11.25	Community activities	07.11.26	5	342	0	1	1	0
TV in Japan 07.12.09	the late TV	07.12.09	3	338	0	5	1	0
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21	learning with computers	07.12.21	6	404	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	46	3365	5	7	3	0	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

I think my TV in Japan essay is the best in my essays, because this essay has catcy title, 5 links and photos. I think it is unique and long essay.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Kenji & pab in Seattle	07.09.26	23	bad
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	。・＊’。°coming of age day 。・＊’。°	07.01.06	16	good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Movie review: Toy story 1	07.11.14	29	good
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Book reveiw 2-03: The Legend of Sleepy Hollow	07.10.26	72	very good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	07.11.13	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	30	good
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Chiritotechin	07.12.04	48	good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.01.12	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	37	so-so

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• ... Yes, I do. I have it in a sidebar
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	36	07.10.03
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	100	07.12.05
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)	64	---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	79

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Book review2-01: Sally's phone	07.10.01	96	0
2-02	Book review2-02: TINKERS ISLAND	07.10.09	36	0
2-03	Book reveiw 2-03: The Legend of Sleepy Hollow	07.10.26	166	1
2-04	Book review 2-04: Dead Man's River	07.10.29	110	0
2-05	Book review 2-05: Kim's choice	07.11.02	163	0
2-06	Book review2-06: Police TV	07.11.11	170	0
2-07	Book reveiw2-07: Newspaper Chase	07.11.18	85	0
2-08	Book review2-08: Who wants to be a star?	07.12.10	155	0
2-09	Book review2-09: Audrey Hepburn	07.12.12	103	0
2-10	Book review2-10: The Beatles	07.12.13	107	0
2-11	Book review2-11: Romeo and Juliet	07.12.14	226	0
2-12	Book review2-12: Leonardo DiCaprio	07.12.16	91	0
2-13	Book review-2-13: little women	07.12.22	140	0
2-14	Book review2-14: British life	07.12.28	340	0
2-15	Book review2-15: SURVIVE!	08.01.02	40	0
2-16	Book review2-16: Matilda	08.01.02	109	0
2-17	Book review2-17: American Life	08.01.03	114	0
2-18	Book review2-18: Emil and the Detectives	08.01.05	75	0
---	---	TOTALS:	2326	1

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I thik my best book reveiw is The Legend of Sleepy Hollow, because there are many words and I can understand this story.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	o
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	o
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	o
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	o
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	o
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	o
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	o
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	o
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	o
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	o
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	o
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? _10_ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. books (18) class (4) dialies (47) essays (6) food (12) job (6) links (16) media (7) movies (6) music (7) photos (43) portfolios (5) quickposts (11) reviews (23) shops (2) traveles (1) tv (6)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	o
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	o
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? __45_ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	o
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* __20_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	o
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? __7_ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ...sports movie (download from You tube) ...TV program ...song ...song ...TV drama ...tune ...tune	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...
2. ...
3. ...

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ...

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...

Proto-portfolio2-02: Essays

Fall Semester Essays

Essays	Short titles [+ links]	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Kumamoto	2007.10.16	22	1487	0	0	0	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	Neccesary places	2007.10.26	5	384	0	0	0	0
Movie review 07.11.11	Toy story 1	2007.11.11	5	410	5	1	1	0
4th essay 07.11.25	Community activities	2007.11.26	5	342		1	1	0
5th essay 07.12.09	the late TV	2007.12.09		338		4	1
6th essay 07.12.21
Totals	---	---							---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

Proto- Portfolio 2-01

Proto-Portfolio 2-01: Reviews, Posts and Words

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	4	3
Blog posts	2	7	13	12
Words	104	485	2626	1741
Sub-totals	106	492	2639	1753				---

Portfolio

Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words	Numbers of comments
Example	Restaurant: Star of India	2007.03.13	185	1
1st (introduction) April (150+ words)	Introduce oneself	2007.03.19	71	0
2nd (campus life) May (200+ words)	Campus life	2007.05.28	207	0
3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+ words)	My favorite	2007.06.05	222	2
4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+ words)	Kumamoto	2007.06.17	286	1
5th (review 1) July 2 (175+ words)	Web site	2007.07.01	181	3
6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words)	Movies	2007.07.10	167	3
---	---	TOTALS:	1136	9

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• ...I think"Kumamoto" is the best of my essays, because this essay is local, sentence is very long. So, it was very important for me to write this essay.

2.0. Comments

---	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog	"Movie: Dreamgirls (Condon, 2006)"	2007.07.17	11	bad
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog	tennis and table tennis	2007.05.09	39	very good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog	my dream	2007.05.14	30	very good
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays	Jack Sparrow	2007.05.30	41	So,so
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.06.08	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	28	So, so
2.4.2. Any of your other posts	My favorite (＾皿＾)	2007.06.05	222	very good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.06.06	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	22	good

* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:

• ... I got many comments from my classmate and Mr. Beaufait. But, I forgot to comment for them . Next semester, I want to comment and to write longer comments.
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

---	Numbers of words	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial	36	2007.04.11
3.2. Best typing speed trial	88	2007.06.13
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials	80	2007.07.18 2007.07.11 2007.07.04

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Number of words	Numbers of comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
1-01	Diana princess of Wales	2007.04.25	87	0
1-02	The wizard of oz	2007.05.07	46	0
1-03	Matilda	2007.05.07	107	0
1-04	Catch me if you can	2007.05.09	85	3
1-05	Gulliver's travels	2007.05.28	90	0
1-06	Titanic	2007.05.28	66	0
1-07	The Phantom of the Opera	2007.06.11	122	0
1-08	Hulk	2007.06.12	95	0
1-09	The devil wear the Prada	2007.07.02	82	0
1-10	Love or money?	2007.07.02	87	0
1-11	Alice in wonderland	2007.07.03	78	0
1-12	The Three Muskeeteers	2007.07.03	80	0
---	---	TOTALS:	481	3

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• ...I think "the phantom of the opera" is the best of my book reviews, because it is many words and this book is good story.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

---	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?	0
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	0
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?	0
5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?	0
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	0
5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural)	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)	0
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	0
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 0	---	---
Which labels, and how many posts each? Books(12) Dialy(17) essays (7) myself(3) proto-porfolio(2) quickposts(12)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?	0
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	0
How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics? ... 21	---	---
5.3.2. Posts with multiple links	---	---
How many of your posts include three (3) or more links? ...6	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
How many of your blog posts include other media? ... 2	---	---

5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

• ... I want to enhance my blogger. Next semester, I want to check my blogger before put my blog.
  

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:

• ...Before I start this class, I don’t like to write in English, because I was a slow typing and no idea. But now, I try to a fast typing. I want to be better blog.
  

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:

...This class is very very fun. I think we studied hard by competing with each other. I think it is very good.