I have 3 suggestions.
First, reading a lot of books. Before Writing class, I hate reading books, but thanks to homework, I like reading books. So, I think that reading connect to success to archive.
Second, my typing was very slowly. So I do practice more and more. I think that typing is very important for us in the future. So I must do practice more.
Third, I think that many picture and media put your blog. And viewer was happy and comment send to you.
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2008年1月30日水曜日
2008年1月16日水曜日
about typing
I will talk about typing. This class always takes a typing test. My typing speed was always very slowly, so I practice typing every day. I bought typing soft. It was very fun for me to study this soft. Now, my typing was faster than past. I like typing very much. When I was a high school student, I took a typing test. But I can’t it. So I hated typing, but now I like typing. It is very important for me to study typing, I think.
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2008年1月9日水曜日
Writing IVC: Portfolio
Student ID: 06151
Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.) Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
Book reviews | 0 | 0 | 4 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 18 | ||
Blog posts | 2 | 7 | 13 | 12 | 36 | 20 | 90 | ||
Words | 104 | 485 | 2626 | 1741 | 3935 | 1437 | 10328 | ||
TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.]) 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
Mega- essay 07.10.12 | Mega Essay | 07.10.16 | 22 | 1487 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | Necessary places | 07.10.26 | 5 | 384 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Movie review 07.11.11 | Movie review: Toy story 1 | 07.11.11 | 5 | 410 | 5 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
Community life 07.11.25 | Community activities | 07.11.26 | 5 | 342 | 0 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
TV in Japan 07.12.09 | the late TV | 07.12.09 | 3 | 338 | 0 | 5 | 1 | 0 | |
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | learning with computers | 07.12.21 | 6 | 404 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Totals | --- | --- | 46 | 3365 | 5 | 7 | 3 | 0 | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.I think my TV in Japan essay is the best in my essays, because this essay has catcy title, 5 links and photos. I think it is unique and long essay.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Kenji & pab in Seattle | 07.09.26 | 23 | bad |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | 。・*’。°coming of age day 。・*’。° | 07.01.06 | 16 | good |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Movie review: Toy story 1 | 07.11.14 | 29 | good |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments*[*] |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Book reveiw 2-03: The Legend of Sleepy Hollow | 07.10.26 | 72 | very good |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 07.11.13 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 30 | good |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Chiritotechin | 07.12.04 | 48 | good |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.01.12 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 37 | so-so |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- ... Yes, I do. I have it in a sidebar
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 36 | 07.10.03 |
3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 100 | 07.12.05 |
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) | 64 | --- |
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 79 | |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
2-01 | Book review2-01: Sally's phone | 07.10.01 | 96 | 0 |
2-02 | Book review2-02: TINKERS ISLAND | 07.10.09 | 36 | 0 |
2-03 | Book reveiw 2-03: The Legend of Sleepy Hollow | 07.10.26 | 166 | 1 |
2-04 | Book review 2-04: Dead Man's River | 07.10.29 | 110 | 0 |
2-05 | Book review 2-05: Kim's choice | 07.11.02 | 163 | 0 |
2-06 | Book review2-06: Police TV | 07.11.11 | 170 | 0 |
2-07 | Book reveiw2-07: Newspaper Chase | 07.11.18 | 85 | 0 |
2-08 | Book review2-08: Who wants to be a star? | 07.12.10 | 155 | 0 |
2-09 | Book review2-09: Audrey Hepburn | 07.12.12 | 103 | 0 |
2-10 | Book review2-10: The Beatles | 07.12.13 | 107 | 0 |
2-11 | Book review2-11: Romeo and Juliet | 07.12.14 | 226 | 0 |
2-12 | Book review2-12: Leonardo DiCaprio | 07.12.16 | 91 | 0 |
2-13 | Book review-2-13: little women | 07.12.22 | 140 | 0 |
2-14 | Book review2-14: British life | 07.12.28 | 340 | 0 |
2-15 | Book review2-15: SURVIVE! | 08.01.02 | 40 | 0 |
2-16 | Book review2-16: Matilda | 08.01.02 | 109 | 0 |
2-17 | Book review2-17: American Life | 08.01.03 | 114 | 0 |
2-18 | Book review2-18: Emil and the Detectives | 08.01.05 | 75 | 0 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 2326 | 1 |
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I thik my best book reveiw is The Legend of Sleepy Hollow, because there are many words and I can understand this story.
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | o | |
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | o | |
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | o | |
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | o | |
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | o | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| o | |
| o | |
| o | |
| o | |
| o | |
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | o | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | o | |
| o | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | o | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | o | |
| --- | --- |
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5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...
- ...
- ...
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...
2008年1月8日火曜日
anxiety
Recently, I have begun to awake job hunting. ‘Can I get a job?’ I feel anxiety for my future. So I visited the job department first time. I search for my favorite jobs, but I could not search for it. I want to visit there again.
Don’t you have any fear of the future?
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Don’t you have any fear of the future?
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He's a pirate
I like tunes of Pirates of the Caribbean. Especially, I like He is a pirate. This is main theme song of Pirates of the Caribbean. Of course, I have a soundtrack, but I don’t have a score. Today, I finally got this score. I was very happy. I will practice the piano every day.
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Today's class
I slept late this morning. I though this morning was very cold, so I was not able to take the first class, Japanese history. Second class was Listening class. Today, There was a listening test in class. I studied listening test yesterday, but I couldn't solve test.( ;_ ;) So I am afraid of a semester test.
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2008年1月7日月曜日
nanakusa-gayu
I ate nanakusa-gayu at the dinner. On the morning of January 7, or the night before, people place the nanakusa, rice scoop, and wooden pestle on the cutting board and, facing the good-luck direction, chant "Before the birds of the continent fly to Japan, let's get nanakusa" while cutting the herbs into pieces. This chant varies as well.
The seventh of the first month has been an important Japanese festival since ancient times. The custom of eating nanakusa-gayu on this day, to bring longevity and health, developed in Japan from a similar ancient Chinese custom, intended to ward off evil. Since there is little green at that time of the year, the young green herbs bring color to the table and eating them suits the spirit of the New Year.
The seventh of the first month has been an important Japanese festival since ancient times. The custom of eating nanakusa-gayu on this day, to bring longevity and health, developed in Japan from a similar ancient Chinese custom, intended to ward off evil. Since there is little green at that time of the year, the young green herbs bring color to the table and eating them suits the spirit of the New Year.
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2008年1月6日日曜日
Sweeney Todd
The movie which I want to watch now is Sweeney Todd: The demon barber of Fleet street. Of course, Sweeney is Johnny Depp. I'm looking forward to watching this movie. However, I do not know contents of this story well. But I want to watch this movie.
This movie's home page is here
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Winter vacation finished
Today, a short winter vacation finished. I was substantial for me. I enjoyed myself this winter vacation. A school begins at tomorrow. I don’t go to school...... But I want to meet my friends. I want to take a class seriously from tomorrow.
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2008年1月5日土曜日
Finished part-time job
Today, I finished my part-time job in post office. I thought it was very, very good job. I made friends with a lot of people, so I enjoyed myself. As for working, it was had a good experience for me.
This picture is my treasure. This is a diary of the workplace experience that I wrote at the age of a junior high student. Actually, I decided to work part-time at this opportunity. This is my memory.
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Book review2-18: Emil and the Detectives
I read Emil and the Detectives. Emil is traveling alone to his grandmother’s house in the city. He is carrying money to her from this mother. Then a man on the train steals the money Emil follows the thief and an exciting adventure begins, with lots of detectives, a lift boy, and a fight in a bank! I thought this story was very interested me, but it was difficult for me to understand this story.
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2008年1月3日木曜日
Book review2-17: American Life
I read American Life. I have never been to foreign countries, but I want to go to many foreign countries. Especially, I want to go to America. The United States is a very big country. I like American movies. American movie-makers about 570 movies each year. Other countries make more movies- there are 850 new movies every year in India. But many people watch American movies around the world. Of course, movie-makers know this. Some American movies do not make a lot of money in the US, but people in other countries love them. I think that America has a lot of things which Japan does not have. I understood to read this book.
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Mr.H
Recently, I talk for a long time on the phone with my friends. We talk about Coming of Age Day, but especially love. I fall in love with postal clerk. He is very funny and kind. We talk about him. He and I changed each other's e-mail address. He makes me happy. I respect him. I want to become a postal clerk like him.
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I love Chopin
I love classical music. Especially, I like Chopin’s music. Playing the piano is one of my hobbies. I practice the piano every day. I play Chopin’s Fantaisie- impromptu recently. I like this tune. This tune is used well by a player of figure skating. I put this tune with my glog. Please listen it and you play the piano this tune.
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My favorite TV program
My favorite TV program is nodame cantabile. This TV program is drama. It is very funny. I will introduce this story.
Shinichi Chiaki is the top piano student at the Momogaoka College of Music and an excellent violinist, but Chiaki doesn't care about playing these instruments as much as he dreams of someday being a conductor. Chiaki, however, has several deeply rooted fears about traveling, and so finds himself "trapped" in Japan. Because he's trapped, Chiaki starts to question exactly how far he can possibly go in music, especially when he's passed over again and again for others he believes less worthy of musical scholarship and fame.
Recently dumped by his girlfriend for a "ham" looking fellow, passed over for a chance to go overseas, and removed from his star spot in the piano competition because he walked out on his piano instructor, Chiaki is at his limit. This is when he meets Nodame, or Megumi Noda. Nodame is a free — and filthy — spirit who reminds Chiaki that music can be fun and what drew him to be a conductor in the first place. In learning how to deal with Nodame, Chiaki learns how to deal with others. Chiaki begins to realize what is possible for him, even within the country of Japan.
For Nodame, Chiaki is everything she isn't. Clean, neat, dedicated, studious and inherently arrogant about his accomplishments and capabilities, Chiaki constantly bullies her into being more serious about life. He sees potential in her and her abilities as a pianist that she doesn't care about. She loves Chiaki and wants to be with him. But, because she's serious about neither her piano studies nor her personal hygiene, Chiaki always denies her affections.
Drawn together in a turbulent relationship, Chiaki's perfectionism and Nodame's untamed nature end up complementing each other. As the story progresses, they mature as individuals, as musicians and as a couple.
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Shinichi Chiaki is the top piano student at the Momogaoka College of Music and an excellent violinist, but Chiaki doesn't care about playing these instruments as much as he dreams of someday being a conductor. Chiaki, however, has several deeply rooted fears about traveling, and so finds himself "trapped" in Japan. Because he's trapped, Chiaki starts to question exactly how far he can possibly go in music, especially when he's passed over again and again for others he believes less worthy of musical scholarship and fame.
Recently dumped by his girlfriend for a "ham" looking fellow, passed over for a chance to go overseas, and removed from his star spot in the piano competition because he walked out on his piano instructor, Chiaki is at his limit. This is when he meets Nodame, or Megumi Noda. Nodame is a free — and filthy — spirit who reminds Chiaki that music can be fun and what drew him to be a conductor in the first place. In learning how to deal with Nodame, Chiaki learns how to deal with others. Chiaki begins to realize what is possible for him, even within the country of Japan.
For Nodame, Chiaki is everything she isn't. Clean, neat, dedicated, studious and inherently arrogant about his accomplishments and capabilities, Chiaki constantly bullies her into being more serious about life. He sees potential in her and her abilities as a pianist that she doesn't care about. She loves Chiaki and wants to be with him. But, because she's serious about neither her piano studies nor her personal hygiene, Chiaki always denies her affections.
Drawn together in a turbulent relationship, Chiaki's perfectionism and Nodame's untamed nature end up complementing each other. As the story progresses, they mature as individuals, as musicians and as a couple.
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2008年1月2日水曜日
Book review2-16: Matilda
I read Matilda. I introduce this book. Matilda is 5 years old. Matilda read all the library books of a village at 5 years old. She is genius. But her parents were not going to recognize her genius. She has a great time giving them what they deserve. But at school things are different. At school there's Miss Trunchbull: two hundred pounds of kid-hating headmistress. Giving Miss Trunchbull what she deserves will take more than a genius.....it will take a superhuman genius! This book is very interesting and funny. But I had a poor vocabulary, so it was difficult for me to read it. But I recommend this book.
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Book review2-15: SURVIVE!
2008年1月1日火曜日
A Happy New Year!!
A Happy New Year!!
This year, I want to study English very hard, improve my English skill and work part-time. What is your goal this year?
I hope to see more of you.
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This year, I want to study English very hard, improve my English skill and work part-time. What is your goal this year?
I hope to see more of you.
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