2007年5月16日水曜日

Proto-portfolio(May 16-22)

1.0. Essays

1.1. Self-introduction essay




1.2. Second essay


1.3 3rd essay


My favorite


222 words


2007.06.05


1.4 4th essay

   Kumamoto

268 words

2007.06.17

1.5 5th essay

Web site

181 words

2007.07.01

1.6 6th essay

Movies
166 words
2007.07.10

1.5. Best essay: Which do you believe is better & why?
My best eassy is Kumamoto.

2.0. Comments

2.1. Your first comment on instructor's blog:




2.2. Your best comment on a classmates blog

I think that my comment is very simple and I wrote about oneself. therefore Good.


2.3. The best comment by a classmate on your blog by a classmate


  • my dream
  • 30 words

  • 2007.5.14

  • Why do you believe that is a good comment?

She gave me advice.


3.0. Typing speed trials

3.1. Worst speed


  • 45 words

  • 2007.5.16


3.2. Best speed

  • 66 words

  • 2007.5.9


3.3. Average speed

  • 52 words

  • number of trials

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Book review 1-01
Diana princess of Wales
87 words
2007.04.25


4.2. Book review 1-02
The wizard of oz
46 words
2007.05.07


4.3. Book review 1-03
Matilda
107 words
2007.05.07

4.4. Book review 1-04
Catch me if you can
85 words
2007.05.09

4.5. Book review 1-05
Gulliver's travels
90 words
2007.05.28

4.6. Book review 1-06
Titanic
66 words
2007.05.28

4.7 Book review1-07

The Phantom of the Opera

122 words

2007.6.11

4.8 Book review1-08

Hulk

95 words

2007.6.12

4.9 Book review1-09

The devil wear the Prada

82 words

2007.07.02


4.10Book review1-10

Love or money?

87 words

2007.07.02

4.11 Book review1-11

Alice in wonderland

78 words

2007.07.03

4.12 Book revies1-12

The Three Muskeeteers

80 words

2007.07.03


5.0. Visual presentation

5.1. Archive at top of sidebar (Yes/No):





5.1.1. Displaying titles of posts:Yes





5.1.2. Organized by month (or week):Yes





5.2. Labels displayed in sidebar (Yes/No):









5.1.1. Including: books, essays & quickposts: Yes





5.1.2. Including other labels that you've attached to more than one post:Yes





List of other labels that you've used:Diary






5.3. Links & media





5.3.1. Pictures
Does your blog profile include a picture? No






How many of your blog posts include pictures? 7






5.3.w. Posts with multiple links






How many of your posts include three or more links? 0






5.3.3. Other media






How many of your blog posts include other media? 0






Which other media have you used?

























1 件のコメント:

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hi Mami,

Please allow me to make a few quick observations about your proto-portfolio. First of all, I notice that the word counts for your first two essays are well below the minimums: 150+ and 200+ words, respectively. You'll need to develop them both further, following suggestions that I've posted on my blog.

Second, the comment that you've listed as appearing on my blog (your instructor's blog) is actually on Satoshi's. You'll need to locate your first comment on my blog, and assess that instead of the one on Satoshi's.

Finally, there seems to be way too much white space between the main headings of your proto-portfolio and the content in each section. I suggest that you eliminate a few of the extra line breaks (returns).

Cheers.