1.1. Self-introduction essay
- Introduce oneself
- 71 words
- 2007.03.19
1.2. Second essay
- Campus life
- 207 words
- 2007.05.28
1.3 3rd essay
My favorite
222 words
2007.06.05
1.4 4th essay
Kumamoto
268 words
2007.06.17
1.5 5th essay
181 words
2007.07.01
1.6 6th essay
Movies166 words
2007.07.10
1.5. Best essay: Which do you believe is better & why?
My best eassy is Kumamoto.
2.0. Comments
2.1. Your first comment on instructor's blog:
- link http://satoshisroom.blogspot.com/2007/05/tennis-and-table-tennis.html
- 49 words
- 2007.5.9
- Do you believe that is a good comment? Why or why not?
My comment is very simple
2.2. Your best comment on a classmates blog
- tennis and table tennis
- 39 words
- 2007.5.9
- Why do you believe that is a good comment?
I think that my comment is very simple and I wrote about oneself. therefore Good.
2.3. The best comment by a classmate on your blog by a classmate
- my dream
- 30 words
- 2007.5.14
- Why do you believe that is a good comment?
She gave me advice.
3.0. Typing speed trials
3.1. Worst speed
- 45 words
- 2007.5.16
3.2. Best speed
- 66 words
- 2007.5.9
3.3. Average speed
- 52 words
- number of trials
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Book review 1-01
Diana princess of Wales
87 words
2007.04.25
4.2. Book review 1-02
The wizard of oz
46 words
2007.05.07
4.3. Book review 1-03
Matilda
107 words
2007.05.07
4.4. Book review 1-04
Catch me if you can
85 words
2007.05.09
4.5. Book review 1-05
Gulliver's travels
90 words
2007.05.28
4.6. Book review 1-06
Titanic
66 words
2007.05.28
4.7 Book review1-07
122 words
2007.6.11
4.8 Book review1-08
95 words
2007.6.12
4.9 Book review1-09
82 words
2007.07.02
4.10Book review1-10
Love or money?
87 words
2007.07.02
4.11 Book review1-11
Alice in wonderland
78 words
2007.07.03
4.12 Book revies1-12
The Three Muskeeteers
80 words
2007.07.03
5.0. Visual presentation
5.1. Archive at top of sidebar (Yes/No):
5.1.1. Displaying titles of posts:Yes
5.1.2. Organized by month (or week):Yes
5.2. Labels displayed in sidebar (Yes/No):
5.1.1. Including: books, essays & quickposts: Yes
5.1.2. Including other labels that you've attached to more than one post:Yes
List of other labels that you've used:Diary
5.3. Links & media
5.3.1. Pictures
Does your blog profile include a picture? No
How many of your blog posts include pictures? 7
5.3.w. Posts with multiple links
How many of your posts include three or more links? 0
5.3.3. Other media
How many of your blog posts include other media? 0
Which other media have you used?
1 件のコメント:
Hi Mami,
Please allow me to make a few quick observations about your proto-portfolio. First of all, I notice that the word counts for your first two essays are well below the minimums: 150+ and 200+ words, respectively. You'll need to develop them both further, following suggestions that I've posted on my blog.
Second, the comment that you've listed as appearing on my blog (your instructor's blog) is actually on Satoshi's. You'll need to locate your first comment on my blog, and assess that instead of the one on Satoshi's.
Finally, there seems to be way too much white space between the main headings of your proto-portfolio and the content in each section. I suggest that you eliminate a few of the extra line breaks (returns).
Cheers.
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